Childhood
memories last forever. I still remember the days of my childhood when my mother
after dinner, would take me to the terrace. With no one to disturb us, the moon
would be stealthily traversing the sky as if to reach somewhere in a hurry whereas
the stars preferred to be stationary and silent listeners, setting right, the
mood for story-telling, enhancing it was the pleasant breeze from the meadows.
Having settled
down in bed my mother would start a story.
Once there
were two villages on the opposite side of a big jungle. The connecting road
between these two villages passed through this jungle. In this jungle lived a
cruel and ruthless person. His name was Valiyo. He would not only rob the
pedestrian of their belonging but also kill them. He was a merciless person. He
had killed many and his killing spree continued unabated. One day he happened
to meet Narad. Narad had nothing to offer. The anger of Valiyo knew no bounds,
he raised his hand to kill Narad. Narad said I don’t mind getting killed but
can you answer me a question or two. Narad asked why do you rob people? Valiyo
replied “To feed my family” Narad asked another question “Would your family
members be willing to accept the consequences of the robbing that you do for
them?” Valiyo had never come across such a person. He tied up Narad to a tree
and went back home to ask. Having heard “No” from his family members; dejected
and dispirited he came back and released Narad. Narad gave him some more advice
and went on his way. Valio was a changed person from then on. In the beginning
I was consciously involved in the story but later on, my unconscious
involvement in the story subsided and the birds’ clutter in the sky disturbed
me. I looked around. My mother was gone and busy with her kitchen chores. As I
raised my eyes towards the crimson sky the stars were nowhere to be found but
the moon who still there. I asked him why, what happened, why are you left
behind? He didn’t reply. I left for the morning tea, thinking he might have got
interested in the story at the last moment and was hoping the story would
continue……
Come night,
and an urge for story listening would get stronger and stronger. I would finish
my dinner soon. Having finished my dinner I would help my mother finish her
kitchen chores so that I could take her to the terrace. She too would be willing
to tell one. Every night it was the same venue and the same ambience except for
the waxing and waning mood of the moon. I use to think about his abnormal
behavior. At times being late, at times being totally absent and at times fully
shining. Of course every night it was time for a new story, new characters and
a new plot.
Rivers have to
flow, seasons have to go, time has to change and I have to grow. The story
listener is here but the story teller is no more. She has left for her heavenly
abode. Though alone, the treasure handed over by her, keeps me going. Now it is
my turn to tell stories. See you next time with my own story and stories within
my story. To start with the story of Arvind Srivastav.
Dear Bhaskarbhai,
ReplyDeleteBest of Luck with blogging!
May you publish a book that will benefit many many young minds in Jubail and rest of the world.
Regards,
Naresh
Dear Bhaskarbhai,
ReplyDeleteI suggest you may add "moral of the story" at the end.
Prashant
It's wonderful story and above all unique narration thereby leaving a long lasting impression.
ReplyDeleteIt is excellent, time come and goes, one should mould and change with positive frame of mind. Such more boosting stories will be value addition for many.
ReplyDeletePlease continue adding such stories and enrich others.
Regards,
Anil K. Kewalramani
Dear Sir,
ReplyDeleteIt was a wonderful story and it touched my heart. It made me to think about my younger days and my beloved and affectionate mother, She is still alive to guide me in all aspects, Keep writing more stories.
Thanks & Best Regards,
Dear Bhaskarbhai,
ReplyDeleteThe story conveys the value of mother who transformed her child to take up the role of story telling. The conclusion emphasizes the importance of story telling.
Regards
Patel sahab. very touching story!
ReplyDeleteDear Patel Sir,
ReplyDeleteIt is good that you took a step to express your experiance to the world, where people are constrained in thier daily problems. I belive everybody comes across heart touching moments activating their spirit throughout life .
Goodluck and Best wishes for your efforts.
Dear Patel Sir,
ReplyDeleteThis is a narration which is nearly same for everyone's childhood but not everyone can put his words to mention his feelings.
Great Article and looking for some other great stuffs in future.
Dear BHASKARBHAI,
ReplyDeleteVery nice story heart touching story, please publish the story in a book.
Tejash shah
Dear Bhasker Ji... The foundations of communications & creative thinking are on stories told to us by our parents or elders during our childhood.
ReplyDeleteYour story above instigates all of us to continue with this seemingly simple practice with the children in our family.
LET US ALL AWAKEN THE "STORYTELLER" IN US & FOR INSPIRATION RECALL THE STORIES TOLD BY OUR PARENTS / ELDERS.
...KUDOS Bhasker Ji
A question can change once life.
ReplyDeleteThe story is inspirational to me.
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